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Monday, 29 June 2020

Writing Task

Swimming with Green Sea
Turtles


WALT: use our senses to make our writing more interesting.


Imagine going snorkelling at a beach and seeing beautiful green sea turtles.
What do you think the experience would be like?


Task 1: Watch the video clip on the site. Imagine you were the person
snorkelling… Put yourself in their flippers.


Task 2: Brainstorm using your senses. What do you think you would be
able to see/hear/smell/touch/taste if you were swimming with Green Sea
Turtles?


In this table, write the descriptive words that you would be able to see/hear/smell/touch/taste.
What can I see?
What can I hear?
What can I smell?
What can I touch/feel?
What can I taste?
Hard-shelled
Whistling wind
Salt
Rough
Salt from the water
The way it swam
The beathing
Feashwater
Hard 
Olive 
Green 
air
Shell 
water
water





Need some help? - make sure that you use words that you know… even better - search what some
of these words mean and use them in your writing!


Task 3: Write a story about what it would be like to swim with Green Sea
Turtles.


 one day me and my family went on a boat around the pacific ocean.
We put on our diving sot to swim.
As i went under the water i saw the most beautiful thingever a
green sea turtle.When i was under water i went to go and touch
it. It was hard’.I could taste the salt water and hear the breathing of
the the green sea turtle.



I was swimming by this green sea turtle’.I could see the bright blue water’
and fish around me.As i swam i felt like i was in paradise’. I could touch the
sea turtle and it didn’t mind.I could see it go below the ocean and i flowed it
down it was eating seagrass.I thought it was going to eat something different
to seagrass.




I went back up to the surface to tell my family.I told my mum and dad and
my sister and brother.They came to check it out.They were Shocked they
had never seen one like this before.I went back up to the boat to set down
i had a nerf of swimming.Then my family had came up back to the boat
because the sea turtle had gone.So all of my family got into the boat and
we went back to land.We had a great time swimming in the ocean at first it was
cold but i was fine. 

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